Updated the personal information notice email text based on advice from councel (Tom Zych).

 - Legacy-Id: 15475

Author: levkowetz

ietf/templates/utils/personal_information_notice.txt

@@ -1,18 +1,22 @@
 {% load ietf_filters %}{% filter wordwrap:78 %}
 Dear {{ person.plain_name }},
 
-This email is regarding some of the personal information stored in your IETF datatracker
-profile; information for which we require your consent for storage and use.
+We write to address certain personal information stored in your IETF
+datatracker profile.  Going forward, we will maintain and use your personal
+information only with your consent.
 
 If you do nothing in response to this email, the information in your profile
-that requires consent ({{ fields|safe }} and login) will be deleted {{ days }}
-days from now, on {{ date }}.  If you later wish to create a new login, you can
-do so at {{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.ietfauth.views.create_account' %}.
+that requires consent ({{ fields|safe }}) will be deleted {{ days }} days from
+the date of this email, that is, on {{ date }}.  If you later wish to create a
+new login, you can do so at
+{{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.ietfauth.views.create_account' %}.
 
-If you would like to keep the information that requires consent available, please go to
-{{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.ietfauth.views.profile' %}, and review and
-edit the information as desired.  When ready, please check the 'Consent' checkbox found
-at the bottom of the page and submit the form. 
+If you would us to continue to maintain and process the information that
+requires your consent, please go to 
+{{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.ietfauth.views.profile' %}, 
+and review and edit the information as desired and confirm your consent to our
+continued maintenance and use of your information by checking the 'Consent'
+checkbox found at the bottom of the page, and then submit the form.
 
 For information on how personal information is handled in the datatracker, please see
 {{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}/help/personal-information.