Updated the personal information notification email template.

 - Legacy-Id: 15458

Author: levkowetz

ietf/templates/utils/personal_information_notice.txt

@@ -1,20 +1,23 @@
 {% load ietf_filters %}{% filter wordwrap:78 %}
 Dear {{ person.plain_name }},
 
-This email concerns some personal information stored in your IETF datatracker profile that
-requires your consent for storage and use.
+This email is regarding some of the personal information stored in your IETF datatracker
+profile; information for which we require your consent for storage and use.
 
-If you do nothing in response to this email, the information in your profile that requires
-consent ({{ fields|safe }}) will be deleted one month from now, on {{ date }}.
+If you do nothing in response to this email, the information in your profile
+that requires consent ({{ fields|safe }} and login) will be deleted {{ days }}
+days from now, on {{ date }}.  If you later wish to create a new login, you can
+do so at {{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.ietfauth.views.create_account' %}.
 
 If you would like to keep the information that requires consent available, please go to
-{{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.ietfauth.views.profile' %}, check the
-information, scroll down to the end of the page, check the 'Consent' checkbox and submit
-the form.
+{{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.ietfauth.views.profile' %}, and review and
+edit the information as desired.  When ready, please check the 'Consent' checkbox found
+at the bottom of the page and submit the form. 
 
 For information on how personal information is handled in the datatracker, please see
 {{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}/help/personal-information.
 
+
 Thank You,
 The IETF Secretariat
 {% endfilter %}